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  • Are the names of your characters important/significant?

    As the ever-famous Bard once wrote: “What’s in a name? That which we call a rose/By any other name would smell as sweet.” Which can be true, to a point, but writers can be crafty sometimes. Sometimes we aim for symbolism or deeper meaning. Sometimes a rose is just a rose. We asked the Confabulators this week about how much thought they put into their character names.

    Paul Swearingen

    Some of the names of my characters, like “Arianna”, for example, are just ones that I’ve always liked. On the other hand “Arianna’s” sister “Lindi” is both a tribute to a former student who lost her life due to complications from diabetes when she was in her late 40’s and an echo of the name (“Lindsay”) of the daughter of another student, who managed to get herself written into one of my Nanowrimo books because of some funny remarks she made to me the night before Nanowrimo was to start. Her little brother (“Jaz”), whom I included in the story just because has a completely different name than my made-up one. When I told him I had used “Jaz” for his name, he informed me that he preferred the name “Jake” (he was seven at the time). So he got written into the current work-in-progress as “Jake”. He’d probably be horrified if I told him that “Jake” turned out to be an incorrigible brat, though.

    Ashley M. Poland

    Not always, and in fact, pretty rarely. If I’m going to change a name, then I’ll look for something that has a thematic meaning — or if I’m inventing a character from scratch, I might look for something that fits the story. For instance, in a book I’m working on now I was using randomly generated names, which came before the story even had a plot. By the 75K word mark, I realized that not only did I dislike my main character’s name, but it didn’t reflect what I had decided about her heritage. So I changed it (and her brother’s).

    Christie Holland

    Character names are both the most significant part of your story and the least. On one hand, it’s an opportunity to give your readers insight into the personality of a character, whether they choose to go by the name they were given or not, as well as into their home life. A parent who names their son “John” is going to be much different from the one that names their son “Lucifer.” I always try to add a little bit of meaning to a name, but at the end of the day, a name is just a name. As long as it fits your character, it doesn’t really matter.

    Kevin Wohler

    In my early years, I tried very hard to give my main characters names that 1) made them memorable, and 2) described them to a certain degree. I ended up with with characters with names like “Jade,” “Knox” and “Jazz.” This was — in a word — inadvisable. Nowadays, I give my characters ordinary names, only getting creative when I have to come up with superhero handles.

    Jason Arnett

    I can honestly say that ever since I read the uncut edition of Stranger in a Strange Land I have considered the names of my characters. Sometimes I worry about the meaning of the name, more often I don’t. What I consider more than anything else is how the names flow with one another. Being honest, I want the dialogue to read well and the names to be linked with each other like Sam and Diane, Buck  and Wilma, Flash and Dale, the Lone Ranger and Tonto. I do look up the meanings of the names but only after I’ve established that they work together.

    Ted Boone

    I try to have names that resonate. I also try to only use each letter of the alphabet once for first names: makes them easier to remember/organize.

    Sara Lundberg

    I am terrible at coming up with names, even simple ones, and it’s probably because I want them all to be significant somehow. I always look up the meaning of a name before using it in a story to be sure that it fits the character. Every now and then a character will announce his or her name and I’m stuck using it even if it doesn’t have significance, although even then it usually turns out that there’s some kind of significance I wasn’t consciously aware of. And sometimes a name is only significant to me.

  • Crowd Control (Week Ending September 15)

    The next time you’re at a party or in a crowded restaurant, try listening to the conversations around you. Usually it all becomes an auditory blur, that can be mimicked by saying “watermelon, cantaloupe, watermelon, cantaloupe” over and over. Now imagine trying to write that dialogue.

    For writers, large casts of characters present some unique problems. Not only is there the very real possibility of over-lapping conversations, there is also what is known in theatre as “blocking” — the movement and positioning of characters on a stage. A writer must know where each character is and what he or she is doing at any particular moment.

    So we’ve asked our writers in the Cafe to share with us their tips. What’s the best way to write dialogue for a crowded room? When is it a good time to give secondary characters a chance to shine? How does one keep crowds of characters from spiraling into chaos?

    We hope you’ll find the advice from our writers helpful. Be sure to leave comments with them if you have any questions or if you’d like to share your own tips.

    Until Next Week,

    The Cafe Management

  • Which is more embarrassing to write: sex or violence?

    Over the past week, the Confabulators talked about how we get past judgment in order to write what we want. So, now that you know that we do, for the most part, write whatever we want, and we’ve talked previously about where we draw lines as writers, you’ve gotten a pretty good idea of what we’re comfortable writing, and what makes us squirm a bit. So, we’ve asked them the big question for this week’s Ephemera. Which makes us squirm more: writing sex or writing violence?

    Paul Swearingen

    Since my chosen genre is YA, I haven’t had to write about teenage sex. Yet. However, I’ve had to tackle some descriptions of violence, and since these are always from a teenager’s POV I try to remember what it might have been like for either a boy or girl to get smacked, sometimes for the first time and simply describe the action from their point of view. The only embarrassment might come from the teenager’s dealing with a slightly-altered appearance and having to explain it to a parent.

    Jason Arnett

    I can’t tell you that I’ve ever been embarrassed to write sex or violence, per se, but I’ve been reticent to include too much of one or the other because what appeals to me may not appeal to others. I’m very aware of – or at least I try to be – the fact that my tastes are probably a little different than others. A hot scene between two people who are having sex is only good if it’s well-written and I’ve read a lot of scenes that aren’t well-written. Same goes with violence. I think there needs to be a level of craft and artistry to pull detailed passages off in either case. I often wonder if I’m good enough to do it and so in that wondering I tend to write around those things. That said, lately, I’m trying my hand at both in newer works. We’ll see what people think.

    Ashley M. Poland

    I’m actually more embarrassed to admit that for me, it’s sex. For whatever reason, I can get downright verbally vulgar and generally be alright, but the second it comes time to write things down, it gets very difficult. Part of it is that it’s very easy to write bad sex, especially of the IKEA variety; there’s an art to writing a good erotic scene. Also, I get very flustered at the idea of accidentally writing my own sexual preferences/interests into a story. It may not be a logic worry, but it’s something that gets me all the same.

    Christie Holland

    While sex and violence are both incredibly difficult to write (in my experience), I think sex is more embarrassing. Mostly because I’m terrified of someone reading over my shoulder and going, OH MY GOD LOOK AT WHAT SHE’S WRITING! YOU’RE NOT SUPPOSED TO KNOW WHAT THAT IS YET! But maybe that’s my paranoia talking.

    Kevin Wohler

    I’ve encountered plenty of sex and violence in my reading, but it’s not easy for me to write either. I don’t mind gruesome or scary, but torture (as I’ve mentioned elsewhere) is nearly impossible for me to write. I don’t like pain and suffering. I haven’t written a lot of sex, but that’s because my stories are meant for a more general audience. However, I think if it were necessary to the story, I could craft some steamy sex scenes. Only under an assumed name, though.

    Ted Boone

    I think you can get away with alluding to sex without the reader getting too upset with you as an author. Violence, on the other hand, is harder to shy away from. That said, extreme cases of either sex or violence always pose a challenge for me to write, but sex is probably harder. It feels more personal.

  • What If My Mom Reads This? (Week Ending Sept 8)

    As writers, our imaginations often run wild. We can imagine everything from a chaste kiss to passionate lovemaking. We can envision acts of terrorism as easily as we dream up acts of heroism. The only thing that limits an imagination is one’s own restraint.

    Writers often walk the edge of what’s socially acceptable. Sometimes we delve into the shadows and make readers uncomfortable. And when we dance with the darker side, we run the risk of letting those we love see a part of ourselves we don’t like to admit we have — like graphic sex scenes or descriptions of unspeakable horror.

    This week, we’re asking the writers in the Cafe for their advice. How do writers separate what they write from what people think about the writer?

    Some write whatever they want without fear of reprisals. Others adopt pseudonyms and hide behind anonymity. And still others resort to self-censorship to keep their friends and family from freaking out.

    How about you? When you’re writing, do you censor yourself to keep your parents from dropping your name from the family will? Or do you write anything you want and let the chips fall where they may?

    Until next week,

    The Cafe Management

  • Are there any lines you won’t cross as a writer?

    This week at the Cafe we wrote stories based on what might be considered a controversial painting. With all of the violence in the news lately, certain things seem to slide into the “taboo” category. Movie producers and book publishers might shy away from printing certain subject material, deciding that there are lines they won’t cross, but what about writers? Are there lines even we won’t cross in our writing? It might be as simple as not crossing a line because something has been drastically overdone, but it could also be a moral or ethical line, as well. How do we limit ourselves?

    Paul Swearingen

    As a writer of YA fiction, I’ve barely crossed the “paranormal line” and will probably never pander to the lowest common denominator by including werewolves, vampires, unicorns, and the like in my work. Manipulating reality and history is a lot more fun for me than creating silly beasts out of nothing.

    Amanda Jaquays

    There are two types of things I write, stuff my parents will see and stuff my parents won’t see. Ever. Needless to say, there are quite a few more uncrossable lines in the stuff my parents will see. Fan-based writing that isn’t intended for publication is a whole different story and if there is a line that I haven’t crossed it’s just because I haven’t had the opportunity yet. Of course, all these lines go out the window halfway into the bottle of wine… and that’s why I edit.

    Ted Boone

    I’m not loathe to cross many borders, but I do struggle with graphic scenes, be they violent, creepy, or sexual. Putting that much intense imagery on the page for others to read has always been difficult for me.

    Larry Jenkins

    I have a soft spot for kids, so I’m pretty sure I’ll never write anything that depicts children being victimized. To give you an idea of how strongly my feelings run in this area, I don’t believe the death penalty is an effective deterrent for those who might commit murder, but I’m fully in favor of it when it comes to crimes against children. As far as I’m concerned, if you mess around with kids, you’ve forfeited your ticket to the get-to-keep-on-living show.

    Sara Lundberg

    If I’m writing for myself, I don’t think there is a line I won’t cross: anything that makes me uncomfortable as a writer is a way to challenge myself and become better. That being said, anything that might be controversial or offensive, or even an idea that has been beaten to death but I needed to get out of my system, would never see the light of day.

    Kevin Wohler

    I think every writer has a line of comfort. For me, I don’t like watching, reading, or writing about people torturing other people (animals and sentient alien life included). Movies like Saw or Hostel really turn me off. I know I could never write like that. I think that’s also why I don’t like to read/write true crime.

    Jack Campbell, Jr.

    If there is a line, I haven’t found it.  Horror author Jack Ketchum wrote a great essay called “Splat Goes the Hero.” It’s about honestly recording what is happening in the story and “not looking away.” I really bought in to that idea. I will write whatever the characters show me, no matter how horrible or gruesome. When I re-write, I might tone it down. It’s easy to take stuff out. It’s almost impossible to do the opposite. Lines are for editors and publishers. My job is to write, not censor myself.

    Jason Arnett

    Short answer: Probably. Longer, perhaps more nebulous answer: Probably. Whether consciously or not, I haven’t written anything that’s ever made me uncomfortable. That said, when I’m writing for public consumption I try to balance what goes in with social mores as they exist. It’s not necessarily a restriction, more self-editing. When I’m writing solely for myself or for a targeted (read: private) audience, there are no limits. Well, I suppose that’s not strictly true. I can’t imagine what I wouldn’t write if it fit the story, but I might try to work around a subject that might violate those social mores.

  • Inspired Stories (Week Ending September 1)

    This month, the Cafe is challenging our writers to create a flash fiction short story inspired by an image. This is a bit different than the “Worth 1,000 Words” challenge we had back in March. Instead of everyone having a different image to work with, this month each writer will get his or her inspiration from the same painting.

    Becky by Dave DeHetre
    “Becky” by Dave DeHetre. Used with permission of the artist.

    This painting, titled “Becky,” is the work of Lawrence-based artist Dave DeHetre. It should be noted that because of the powerful image presented here — and in light of recent events in Aurora, Colorado — we gave our writers the option to opt-out of using the painting for this month’s stories.

    In the past Dave DeHetre has been an integral part of the local writers group. But lately, he has poured his creative passion into painting and photography. You can see more examples of his work on his Flickr photostream.

    We are very happy to have Dave’s painting as a starting point for this month’s fiction.

    Until Next Week,

    The Cafe Management

  • Do you ever write naked or dress up like your characters to write?

    Writers will try all sorts of crazy things to grease the writing wheels and inspire the muse. It can sometimes be as superstitious as athletes having their special game-winning underwear, what writers will do to get in the right mood for a story. This week we asked the Confabulators if any of them write in costume…or in nothing at all!

    Paul Swearingen

    No! (I’d look silly in a dress.)

    Jason Arnett

    I believe that every writer should do whatever he needs to put himself in the proper frame of mind to get some writing done. I see a lot on the internet about ‘no pants’ and stuff like that and while it’s tempting, I don’t feel comfortable writing without clothes on. Of course one can assume that each writer has tried every trick he’s been made aware of to tap the muse when it seems impossible.

    Larry Jenkins

    I try not to write naked because I have a leather office chair and bare buns present sticking issues. (Hello, voice of experience.) That being said, pants are always optional.

    Amanda Jaquays

    I do my best writing in the living room, so with roommates, writing naked is a bit of an issue. They tend to object when you lounge about on the couch starkers. Plus, I write on a laptop… and those can get really hot, my delicate skin just can’t handle it. As for dressing up, well… there aren’t any pictures of me dressed up as my characters while I write, so I think I can continue to deny that one too… at least until I’m caught.

    Ted Boone

    Sadly, my apparel during writing is always boring and…there. But now I’m inspired to go au natural and see how it inspires my writing process. Hmm…Naked NaNo?

    Sara Lundberg

    Oooh, I definitely want to have a character costume party for Halloween now. Might be a great way to kick off National Novel Writing Month on November 1st: have the midnight write-in be done in costume? And while I’d never rule writing naked out completely, the closest I’ve come is sitting down to my desk to write something down I thought of in the shower while still in my towel. Sometimes there’s just not enough time to get dressed before I lose my train of thought!

    Kevin Wohler

    When I’m writing I try to be as comfortable as possible. A t-shirt and pajama bottoms is my favorite writing attire. But when I was starting my superhero novel last year, I made a point of wearing superhero t-shirts as often as possible to put me in the frame of mind of a hero.

    Jack Campbell, Jr.

    I have a laptop with a rather ineffective heat sink. It could be downright dangerous to use the thing naked. I’m not a suspicious person, at all. I don’t have things that I think help me get in the proper mindset. I wish I did. I wish I had some hat or something quirky that I could point to and say “That is what I have to wear when I write.” Unfortunately, I am nowhere near that interesting.

  • Page-Turning Prose (Week Ending August 25)

    “I try to leave out the parts people skip.” ~ Elmore Leonard (Get Shorty3:10 to Yuma)

    Writers all want readers to turn the page. The key is to have the reader so engrossed in the story that he or she doesn’t realize it’s the end of a scene — or a chapter — and plows ahead without stopping. Some writers excel at this, and while there’s no magic formula every writer looks for it.

    This week, we’re asking the writers in the Confabulator Cafe what they do to keep the reader turning the page. Is it description, characters, some trick of style? Do they always end a chapter on a cliff-hanger?

    We hope you learn something from this week’s writing advice from our authors.

    And if you’d like some more great writing tips from authors who aren’t part of the Cafe (but certainly could be), check out this great post on BuzzFeed: 30 Indispensable Writing Tips From Famous Authors.

    Until Next Week,

    The Cafe Management

  • Have you ever been in trouble with the police or other authority?

    As writers, we break all kinds of laws. Or, our characters do, at least. Sometimes. The biggest laws most of us have broken are grammar laws. Luckily, we tend to be our own grammar police, so we only ever get busted by each other, or editors. Maybe we get all of our troublemaking out of our system by writing it instead? I’m sure all of us could spin you a good tale about the trouble we’ve been in…

    Paul Swearingen

    Most school administrators didn’t like me very much and retaliated in interesting ways. Some of stories cannot be told, as some of them are still alive. Luckily, one is me.

    Jason Arnett

    Um, no. I’ve had a run-in or two but never had anything one would call trouble. A buddy of mine and I got busted for trespassing. The very nice police put us in separate cars (there were three that answered the call) and drove us back to mine. They worked us pretty hard while we were ostensibly ‘in custody’ and they did their best to scare us. When we were asked if we were drunk, my answer was: “No sir. We’re too young.” When we were asked if we were stoned, I answered: “No sir, can’t afford it.” That got a smirk from one officer. They checked my trunk for anything illegal and told me to return the overdue library books and let us go.

    Amanda Jaquays

    I suppose this is where I tell everyone about where the dead bodies are buried… oh, wait… this isn’t supposed to be fictional. Beyond a couple of noise complaints and a moving violation… the police and I haven’t had much interaction. I hate disappointing people, so that has a tendency to keep me out of trouble. Boring, I know. But that’s just how it is.

    Ted Boone

    When I was a pre-teen, a friend of mine and I decided it would be fun to bombard cars on a nearby highway with snowballs. Third car I hit was a cop car. We ran like hell through back yards and hid out in the woods for about 20 minutes, spying on the policeman looking for us. The policeman drove slowly through our neighborhood ringing doorbells asking if anyone knew who we were. When we finally made it back to my house, our garage door closed _just_ as the police car drove past. Close one!

    Larry Jenkins

    I’m a pretty straight arrow, so I’ve never been in trouble with any kind of authority that I can think of. For the most part, I’m a big believer in laws and rules. I think they are in place for a reason, and, most of the time, we should follow them. That being said, I may or may not have spent some time in my early 20s poking around Area 51 and flipping off a guard station located at the boundaries of that particular government-controlled playground.

    Sara Lundberg

    I’m the type of person (girl) who cries whenever I get pulled over, so needless to say I fear getting in trouble with authority too much to do anything that’d put me in that kind of situation. I’ve gotten a couple traffic tickets, my sixth grade teacher chewed me out one day for having a bad attitude and one time I was in a car full of teenagers where we got pulled over and the driver got arrested, but short of that, I’ve kept my nose clean. Although that could all be a lie. I could be America’s Most Wanted. Is that show still around?

  • Life, the Universe, and Writing (Week Ending August 18)

    Few of us can separate our writing from our personal lives. The stress of life’s tragedies and the joys of life’s celebrations can affect the ability to write. Whether dealing with family problems or issues at work, it doesn’t take a lot to hurt creativity.

    This week, we asked the writers in the Cafe which life events have affected their writing. What did they do to work past it? And how can creativity bloom in the garden of misery? We hope you learn something from their answers.

    Until Next Week,

    The Cafe Management